Thursday, August 13, 2009

Athena's guess who??


There was a girl that had to do chores everyday. She lived with her stepsisters and her stepmother. She had a fairy god mother who was very kind. Her stepsisters and stepmother hated her because she was pretty and they weren't. When they made a mess she will have to clean the mess up, not them. The stepsisters and stepmother got invited to a ball at the palace. The girl wanted to go but she didn't have a dress. When they left the girl tried to make a dress but she couldn't. So she asked her fairy god mother if she could make a dress. The fairy god mother magically made her a beautiful dress she could wear to the ball. When she was at the ball no one recognised her when she danced with the prince. When it was nearly 12 she ran back home and left a shoe behind on the steps. The prince tried to find the girl he danced with at the ball.

Who is this character?

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Athena, That was a very detailed 'Guess Who' you wrote. You gave so many hints and clues that I am guessing you have written about the same person that Nikki wrote about here. Click this link and see if I am correct!
    Mrs Burt

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  2. Hey athena your story was very challening but i got to say that you are cinderella !!keep working hard!!

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